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LidFlipper
09-30-2010, 01:18 PM
I can't get over the first line of the store description:

"In this game your horse-breeding farm is animated in a fantasy surroundings."

I can understand if your studio can't afford a tech writer, but come on now....you are trying to sell a game! Not a great start guys.

RobotID2
10-08-2010, 10:36 AM
I think that sentence really needs an update guys so I'll bash the devs to go through the descriptions :)

Actually the horror is that localization was done to all languages by native speakers. Although obviously developers didn't asked for degree in grammar :)


Cheers LidFlipper!

ke$hatiktok
11-14-2010, 03:46 PM
this is the way!


-Ke$ha