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timishier
05-07-2012, 11:41 AM
Hi I was about to submit my first translation but when I pressed the button I got a Please do not add, change or remove HTML-tags and/or %-markers in your suggestion error. I'm not sure if I removed anything and it is not possible to view the original including tags. So can someone help me find the mistake ?
<p>"Oost Europa, 2008. Oorlog is uitgebroken op de grenzen van Rusland en het lot van de wereld staat op het spel. Dit is het moment waarop de Ghosts worden ingeschakeld; een elite groep van speciaal getrainde groene baretten , bewapend met de laatste technologie en getraind om de dodelijkste wapens te gebruiken. Hun missie: De weg vrijmaken voor de NAVO vredesmacht, en het conflict onder controle the houden voor het explodeert... letterlijk."</p>
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<li><strong>alle realisme, zweet en angst van het spel van het jaar:</strong> bekroonde spanning en dodelijk realisme op de oorlogsgebieden van de toekomst.</li>
<li><strong>Multiplayer:</strong> Online en LAN multiplayer tot wel 36 spelers.</li>
<li><strong>Wapens:</strong> Standaard en speciaal geselecteerde wapens zoals de M16A2, de M4 carbine, en de gevreesde dodelijke OICW.</li> </ul>

its a dutch translation of the following game description http://store.steampowered.com/app/15300

Fatbubba
05-07-2012, 12:21 PM
Here's the original

<p>Eastern Europe, 2008. War has broken out on the borders of Russia and the fate of the world hangs in the balance. That's when the call goes out for the Ghosts—an elite handful of specially trained Green Berets, armed with the latest technology and trained to use the deadliest weapons. Their mission: Spearhead the way for a NATO peacekeeping force, and keep the lid on the conflict before it mushrooms... literally.</p>
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<li><strong>All the realism, sweat, and fear from the Game of The Year:</strong> Award-winning tension and deadly realism on tomorrow's battlefields.</li>
<li><strong>Multiplayer:</strong> Online or LAN multiplayer with up to 36 players.</li>
<li><strong>Weapons:</strong> Standard and special-issue weapons like the M16A2, the M4 carbine, and the fearsome and deadly OICW.</li>
<li><strong>Gameplay:</strong> The total combat experience that teaches a deadly, realistic lesson in how to fight on tomorrow's battlefields.</li>
<li><strong>Includes:</strong> 23 single-player missions, 11 multiplayer maps, and six multiplayer modes.</li> </ul>

I think you forgot two li containers + content

timishier
05-07-2012, 12:32 PM
Epic fail thank you very much