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Live! · 05-17-2007, 12:34 PM

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Geowil · 05-17-2007, 05:56 PM

well, i guess ill show off my graveyard lol. its a wip so it isnt finished yet so theres grass stick up in weird places and such lol.

edit:

decided to just image tag the pics, xD, daker background on here suits it better then the white one on PB.

Latrosicarius · 05-18-2007, 07:08 AM

Nice map Geowil, did you model those statues/graves yourself?

Here's one of mine. Using VeryAngryBeaver's skybox. It's what I imagine a realistic moonbase or space station catwalk/hallway could be like. PM me if you want the map.

FrostbiteX · 05-18-2007, 01:15 PM

probably gonna remap the entire map after a real casino, Like Jed (Wunderboy) said.
Still W.I.P...

vcool · 05-18-2007, 04:03 PM

wow since when are IMG tags are working...

On the other hand, I have a DoD map planned, but I am too lazy to start :/

Ill finish it some day...

EIDT: nvm I get why they are working

Jacc0s · 05-18-2007, 05:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FrostbiteX

http://dragonsden.bulletpain.com/per..._sauce0154.jpg
probably gonna remap the entire map after a real casino, Like Jed (Wunderboy) said.
Still W.I.P...

Nice can you post some more of that map?

FrostbiteX · 05-18-2007, 06:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jacc0s

Nice can you post some more of that map?

Not atm, sorry.

Kev_Boy · 05-20-2007, 09:43 AM

CS_Fawlty_Towers
The Ship Fawlty Towers
DE_Cemetery Stairwell
DE_Human Layout

cinnamon whirl · 05-20-2007, 09:44 AM

Couple of SP maps I can't seem to finish:

Oh well, one day......

Train Station:

Pit:

happy_barnacle · 05-20-2007, 03:38 PM

I WANT TO PLAY DE_HUMAN

predulus · 05-20-2007, 06:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cinnamon whirl

Couple of SP maps I can't seem to finish:

Oh well, one day......

Train Station:

Pit:

Look quite nice. A suggestion if I may. On the trainstation one, on the pedestrian bridge over the tracks, at the place where the bridge changes from an arc (over the tracks) to a more square shape (over the platform), you could really really do with some pylons to hold the thing up. If you don't have them, it detracts from the realness of the experience.

Also, the lighting seems a bit ordinary - not enough dark shadows, particularly on that bridge. It kind of looks very stark, and obviously artificial, whereas much of the rest of that map looks nice from the screenie. I'd suggest, if you can't get some more nice shadow on things (or even if you can), changing the texture on that bridge to something a little dirtier, more worn, older.

My 2c worth.

p.s. On second look, part of the problem is those arches - they are too flat-looking IMO, and need some ridging or extrusion in the direction of the camera.

Latrosicarius · 05-20-2007, 08:13 PM

cinnamon whirl, that train station looks awesome, but what is that pit with all the stuff in it?

Kev_Boy, your maps look really nice, but one thing I would suggest is rotating the textures on the spiral stairs on your Cemetery map. I made a similar stairway before, here check this pic out:

Notice how the texture on the stairs changes is rotated to match the angle of each step. However, your map still looks really good

Eimnix · 05-20-2007, 11:24 PM

http://www.blueturret.com/de_labs1.jpg

http://www.blueturret.com/de_labs2.jpg

I've developing this map on and off for a year or two now. It's my pride and joy for Counter-Strike: Source. Oh and it's still a WIP of course.

cinnamon whirl · 05-21-2007, 07:28 AM

Thanks for the comments!
Predulus: Agree about the shadows, I need some more props and decals on the bridge, as it looks a bit bland. Same with the columns, though I havent found one I like yet....

Latrosicarius: Thanks. The pit was a quick map (took 1 afternoon). It is very short, but quite fun. You can d/l the first version (no real begin/end, barrels spawn in mid air):
http://www.cinnamonwhirl.co.uk/maps/pit.bsp

Eimnix: Love that blue lighting!

Kev_Boy · 05-21-2007, 01:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Latrosicarius

Kev_Boy, your maps look really nice, but one thing I would suggest is rotating the textures on the spiral stairs on your Cemetery map.

Yes, that would've been better. On your stairwell though I feel each step is a bit to thick, add more but thinner steps if you really need the height or just make the steps you have thinner

05-17-2007, 12:34 PM	#1
Live! Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Reputation: 0 Posts: 426	Show off your levels :D My Source Work Why hello there! If you've come to brag and boast about your maps and your levels, then good news!, you've come to the right place! Rules Please do not critisize other people's works, we all make mistakes, and we all learn from them. If you have modified somebody else's work, be sure to specify the original creator, in order for us to not have any misunderstandings. Do not spam, troll, or use offensive slang. Simple as that. If you have completed the map you're showing off, please be sure to add it to the Subforum named "Maps" under the Source engine games. Most, importantly, have fun! We are here to have fun, and communicate with other mappers. This thread is a great way to improve your concept and design of the maps. So make sure to listen to any advice given! Over and Out Last edited by Live! : 07-31-2007 at 06:37 PM.

05-17-2007, 05:56 PM	#2
Geowil Join Date: Feb 2006 Reputation: 11 Posts: 938	my graveyard well, i guess ill show off my graveyard lol. its a wip so it isnt finished yet so theres grass stick up in weird places and such lol. edit: decided to just image tag the pics, xD, daker background on here suits it better then the white one on PB. Last edited by Geowil : 05-25-2007 at 03:50 AM.

05-18-2007, 07:08 AM	#3
Latrosicarius Join Date: Oct 2004 Reputation: 0 Posts: 264	Nice map Geowil, did you model those statues/graves yourself? Here's one of mine. Using VeryAngryBeaver's skybox. It's what I imagine a realistic moonbase or space station catwalk/hallway could be like. PM me if you want the map. Last edited by Latrosicarius : 06-05-2007 at 07:14 PM.

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05-18-2007, 01:15 PM	#4
FrostbiteX Join Date: Sep 2004 Reputation: 192 Posts: 6,609	probably gonna remap the entire map after a real casino, Like Jed (Wunderboy) said. Still W.I.P...

05-18-2007, 04:03 PM	#5
vcool Join Date: May 2006 Reputation: 123 Posts: 3,867	wow since when are IMG tags are working... On the other hand, I have a DoD map planned, but I am too lazy to start :/ Ill finish it some day... EIDT: nvm I get why they are working

05-20-2007, 09:43 AM	#8
Kev_Boy Join Date: Aug 2004 Reputation: 1 Posts: 641	CS_Fawlty_Towers The Ship Fawlty Towers DE_Cemetery Stairwell DE_Human Layout

05-20-2007, 09:44 AM	#9
cinnamon whirl Join Date: May 2007 Reputation: 0 Posts: 134	Couple of SP maps I can't seem to finish: Oh well, one day...... Train Station: Pit:

05-20-2007, 03:38 PM	#10
happy_barnacle Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Reputation: 0 Posts: 994	I WANT TO PLAY DE_HUMAN

05-20-2007, 08:13 PM	#12
Latrosicarius Join Date: Oct 2004 Reputation: 0 Posts: 264	cinnamon whirl, that train station looks awesome, but what is that pit with all the stuff in it? Kev_Boy, your maps look really nice, but one thing I would suggest is rotating the textures on the spiral stairs on your Cemetery map. I made a similar stairway before, here check this pic out: Notice how the texture on the stairs changes is rotated to match the angle of each step. However, your map still looks really good

05-20-2007, 11:24 PM	#13
Eimnix Join Date: May 2007 Reputation: 2 Posts: 45	http://www.blueturret.com/de_labs1.jpg http://www.blueturret.com/de_labs2.jpg I've developing this map on and off for a year or two now. It's my pride and joy for Counter-Strike: Source. Oh and it's still a WIP of course.

05-21-2007, 07:28 AM	#14
cinnamon whirl Join Date: May 2007 Reputation: 0 Posts: 134	Thanks for the comments! Predulus: Agree about the shadows, I need some more props and decals on the bridge, as it looks a bit bland. Same with the columns, though I havent found one I like yet.... Latrosicarius: Thanks. The pit was a quick map (took 1 afternoon). It is very short, but quite fun. You can d/l the first version (no real begin/end, barrels spawn in mid air): http://www.cinnamonwhirl.co.uk/maps/pit.bsp Eimnix: Love that blue lighting!